By Shri Kesava Rao Tadipatri.
Rangoli by Smt.Padmini Rao,Coimbatore |
Madhvanama Critical edition - Lyrics:
This composition “MadhvanAma” is ChatuShpadi and has a meter known as “SaraLa RagaLe”, which is a kind of mixture
of other RagaLes like “lalita RagaLe”(Each
syllable group has 5 mAtras), “MandAnila
RagaLe”(Each syllable group has 4 mAtras), “UtsAha RagaLe”(Each syllable group has 3
mAtras).
In this composition, each poem has 4 pAdas. The first and
third Padas have four groups of five mAtras each. The second and fourth Padas
have two groups of five mAtras and two groups with three and four mAtras or
four and three mAtras or five and four mAtras. This also has prAsa-niyama - a
rule where the second letter of all four pAdas of any verse has same consonant
form.
For helping out with accurate recitation, in each pAda, the
first and second group are separated by a single dash and similarly third and
fourth as well. The second and third group are separated by double dash. Also
note that even if the last letter of second and fourth pAda are written as
short, they are treated as long only and the natural singing mode does that as
well. But the last letter of first and third pAdas is short or long as per what
is written. Interestingly this has 32 verses, which symbolically represents 32
sAmudrika lakShaNas of Vayudeva, which he had in all his incarnations.
How this critical
edition is made:
This critical edition is made keeping in view two things -
one is the above mentioned meter (Count of the mAtras and the prAsa-niyama or
rule that second letter of each pAda has same consonant) and second is
artha-anusandhAna.
1. Samples for
Corrections Made Using Meter:
Verse - 2 :
Avavanu- dEhada oLa--horage ni-yAmakanu
ಆವವನು- ದೇಹದ ಒಳ--ಹೊರಗೆ ನಿ-ಯಾಮಕನು
This is supposed to have 10 mAtras in the first part and 10
mAtras in the second part. This has one extra mAtra (11 mAtras) in “Avavanu
dEhada oLa” and one less mAtra (9 mAtras) in “horage niyAmakanu”. If one tries
to split into 10 each, then “La” gets moved to second part and it is difficult
to pause in between “dEhada o” and “La horage” to correct mAtra count.
So this is replaced by
Avavanu- dEhadoLa--horage nI-yAmakanu
ಆವವನು- ದೇಹದೊಳ--ಹೊರಗೆ ನೀ-ಯಾಮಕನು
Verse - 3 :
karaNAbhi-mAni -- suraru dE-havA biDalu
ಕರಣಾಭಿ-ಮಾನಿ -- ಸುರರು ದೇ-ಹವಾ ಬಿಡಲು
The first part “karaNAbhi-mAni” has two mAtras less (only 8
mAtras) and the second part “suraru dE-havA biDalu” has one mAtra more (11
mAtras) and rearranging mAtras still does not balance.
So this is replaced by
karaNAbhi-mAnigaLu -- suraru dE-hava biDalu
ಕರಣಾಭಿ-ಮಾನಿಗಳು -- ಸುರರು ದೇ-ಹವ ಬಿಡಲು
Verse - 21 :
chaMDavi-kramanu gade--gonDu raNa-dI bhU
ಚಂಡವಿ-ಕ್ರಮನು ಗದೆ--ಗೊಂಡು ರಣ-ದೀ ಭೂ
The second part “gonDu raNa-dI bhU” has one mAtra less (only
9 mAtras).
So this is replaced by
chaMDavi-kramanu gade--gonDu raNa-dalli bhU
ಚಂಡವಿ-ಕ್ರಮನು ಗದೆ--ಗೊಂಡು ರಣ-ದಲ್ಲಿ ಭೂ
Verse - 31 :
putrari-lladavaru -- satputra-raiduvaru
sarvatradali- digvijaya--vahudu sakalA
ಪುತ್ರರಿ-ಲ್ಲದವರು -- ಸತ್ಪುತ್ರ-ರೈದುವರು
ಸರ್ವತ್ರದಲಿ- ದಿಗ್ವಿಜಯ--ವಹುದು- ಸಕಲಾ
The first part of first line has one mAtra less (9 mAtras).
The first part of second line has two mAtras more (12 mAtras). Also this
violates prAsa rule (rva is different from tra). For maintaining prAsa, if sa
is moved to prior line, then it will look like -
putrari-lladavaru sa-- tputrarai-duvaru sa-
rvatradali- digvijaya--vahudu sakalA
ಪುತ್ರರಿ-ಲ್ಲದವರು ಸ--ತ್ಪುತ್ರರೈ-ದುವರು ಸ-
ರ್ವತ್ರದಲಿ- ದಿಗ್ವಿಜಯ--ವಹುದು- ಸಕಲಾ
Then the first part of first line has one mAtra more (11
mAtras, note that “sa” in satputra is guru, being before samyuktAkshara tpu).
To correct all these issues, this is replaced by
putrari-lladaru sa--tputrarai-duvaru sa-
rvatradali- digvijaya--vahudu sakalA
ಪುತ್ರರಿ-ಲ್ಲದರು ಸ--ತ್ಪುತ್ರರೈ-ದುವರು ಸ-
ರ್ವತ್ರದಲಿ- ದಿಗ್ವಿಜಯ--ವಹುದು- ಸಕಲಾ
2. Samples for
Corrections Made using Artha-anusandhAna:
Verse - 6 :
So the part -
taraNigabhi-mukhanAgi-- shabdashA-strava rachisi
ತರಣಿಗಭಿ-ಮುಖನಾಗಿ-- ಶಬ್ದಶಾ-ಸ್ತ್ರವ ರಚಿಸಿ
is replaced by
taraNigabhi-mukhanAgi-- shabdashA-strava paThisi
ತರಣಿಗಭಿ-ಮುಖನಾಗಿ-- ಶಬ್ದಶಾ-ಸ್ತ್ರವ ಪಠಿಸಿ
Verse - 18 :
“garaDi mane-yaLLI -- barasi ava-nanvayava”
This has both mAtra count issue and artha-issue. The first
part has one mAtra less (only 9 mAtras) and second part does not have any
reference to “avananvayava” like “orisi”.
So this is replaced by -
“garaDi mane-yoLu(yali) barasi-- orisi avananvayava”
ಗರಡಿ ಮನೆ-ಯೋಳು(ಯಲಿ) ಬರಸಿ-- ಒರಿಸಿ ಅವ-ನನ್ವಯವ
Verse - 19 :
vairi du-shshAsanana-- raNadalli- eDegeDahi
ವೈರಿ ದು-ಶ್ಶಾಸನನ-- ರಣದಲ್ಲಿ- ಎಡೆಗೆಡಹಿ
is replaced by
vairi du-shshAsanana-- raNadalli- edegeDahi
False Popular story:
The following is just a point to note regarding a false and
very popular episode that is not present in ValmIki Ramayana or MadhvanAma or
any authentic work and is retold all over India and falsely mentioned by many
that Valmiki wrote like that. Claiming that Valmiki wrote is greater sin than
fabricating such an episode that attributes a huge flaw to the Supreme Being
and Hanuman as well. People falsely thought that it extols Hanuman. What a
pity!
Verse - 11 :
There is an extremely popular and absurd story that HanumAn
bit the beads of the pearl necklace given by Sita devi, being unable to find
Sri Rama in there, which calls for the flaw of either the Lord not being
Omnipresent or HanumAn being unable to see His Omnipresence. Added to that a
question pops up as to why did he not do this biting business for the ornaments
(like KUNdalas that he wore) or the garments that he wore. Then he tears his
own heart and shows Sri Rama to others in his heart. That absurd rendering must
have been a recount springing from some immature thought process, which failed
to see that the Lord is present inside and outside everything. If a gift is
granted by Sita devi, Lord Hanuman would surely treasure that with all his
heart not due to desire for the ornament, but due to the respect for any object
given by the Universal mother.
In accordance with Valmiki Ramayana, Sri Sripadarajaru says
- “bhajisi mauktikada hAravanu paDedA”.
There is no mention of biting the pearls and/or showing Sri Rama in his heart
in this or Valmiki Ramayana.
Missing verses:
Also in the popular rendering by the famous singers, two
verses are missing, which are included in this critical edition. They are -
nArirO-dana kELi-- manamarugi- gurusutana
hArhiDidu- shiroratna-- kitti- tegedA
nIroLaDa-gidda du-ryOdhanana- horageDahi
Uruyuga- tanna gade--yiMda- muridA || 22 ||
ನಾರಿರೋ-ದನ ಕೇಳಿ-- ಮನಮರುಗಿ- ಗುರುಸುತನ
ಹಾರ್ಹಿಡಿದು- ಶಿರೊರತ್ನ-- ಕಿತ್ತಿ- ತೆಗೆದಾ
ನೀರೊಳಡ-ಗಿದ್ದ ದು-ರ್ಯೋಧನನ- ಹೊರಗೆಡಹಿ
ಊರುಯುಗ- ತನ್ನ ಗದೆ--ಯಿಂದ- ಮುರಿದಾ || 22 ||
EkaviM-shati kubhA--ShyagaLa bE-ranu taridu
shrIkarA-rchitanolume-- shAstra- rachisi
lOkatra-yadoLidda-- suraru A-lisuvaMte
A kamala-nAbhayati-- nikara-goredA || 26 ||
ಏಕವಿಂ-ಶತಿ ಕುಭಾ--ಷ್ಯಗಳ ಬೇ-ರನು ತರಿದು
ಶ್ರೀಕರಾ-ರ್ಚಿತನೊಳುಮೆ-- ಶಾಸ್ತ್ರ- ರಚಿಸಿ
ಲೋಕತ್ರ-ಯದೊಳಿದ್ದ-- ಸುರರು ಆ-ಲಿಸುವಂತೆ
ಆ ಕಮಲ-ನಾಭಯತಿ-- ನಿಕರ-ಗೊರೆದಾ || 26 ||
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